There’s a voice on the wind that speaks behind me wearing a face that should be mine and isn’t a doubled reflection in a night-blackened window mirrors me transparent against a backdrop of street lamps and headlights and pavement and the trace of stars.
I think that this way it flows better, Changing mirroring to mirrors, and taking out faintest. I really like this, those 2 places just didnt quite flow right to me.
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Date: 2003-04-29 05:40 pm (UTC)that speaks behind me
wearing a face that should be mine
and isn’t
a doubled reflection in a night-blackened window
mirrors me transparent
against a backdrop of street lamps
and headlights
and pavement
and the trace of stars.
I think that this way it flows better, Changing mirroring to mirrors, and taking out faintest. I really like this, those 2 places just didnt quite flow right to me.
See you soon I hope. ^^